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twinkle in her eye by ~gunsblazin:icongunsblazin:



every day she puts her mask
smiles to the world in vain
waste that beatifull smile
just to hide her pain

that missing
twinkle in your eye
shows your sorrow
it can not lie

what they've done
to you is wrong
take my hand
babby try to be strong

dont be scared
dont be alramed
ill keep you safe
you wont be harmed

let me carry you now
rest your feet
lifes road is hard
just dont let yourself be beat

let it out
its ok to cry
just make sure
your happyness  doesnt die

fight against those
that whish to make you frown
dont let them win
dont let them keep you down

to win this battle
you will have to fight
to reclaim you happyness
in your heart do whats right

may you heart
and your soul fly
grow angel wings
and soar into the sky

that twinkle in your eye
may soon return
may the fire in your heart
continue to burn
©2008 ~gunsblazin
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poem for my friend anna.
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~lyriclover627:iconlyriclover627: May 13, 2008, 1:29:06 PM Mood: Love
Dude, this is so good! I love the whole thingy! :]
:+fav: :D

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I am a vampire, but I have lost my fangs!
~Rugthug:iconRugthug: May 13, 2008, 2:18:30 PM
nice job

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A heart is a heart.
A life is a life.
If you get what you want,
Will you want what you get?
~gunsblazin:icongunsblazin: May 13, 2008, 4:55:03 PM
thankies!

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I find it kind of funny
I find it kind of sad
the dreams in which I'm dying
are the best I've ever had.
--Gary Jules
~gunsblazin:icongunsblazin: May 13, 2008, 4:56:23 PM
ty

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I find it kind of funny
I find it kind of sad
the dreams in which I'm dying
are the best I've ever had.
--Gary Jules
~PageSpeaker:iconPageSpeaker: May 13, 2008, 6:40:20 PM
very beautiful. Did you show her the poem yet? I'm sure she'll be very happy to see it. You really write well

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There's only one way to fix a clock. And that's with sugar, butter, jam, and tea. But no mustard. That would be silly.

-Mad Hatter


My Gawd! I'm out for a few minutes and when I come back you're suddenly a fucking pixie?!?!

-Scribe Skean
~gunsblazin:icongunsblazin: May 14, 2008, 11:37:39 AM
thank you. yes she said it made her day =D. thank you. id say you write better than me tho

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I find it kind of funny
I find it kind of sad
the dreams in which I'm dying
are the best I've ever had.
--Gary Jules
~Rugthug:iconRugthug: May 14, 2008, 1:44:33 PM
np

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A heart is a heart.
A life is a life.
If you get what you want,
Will you want what you get?
~PageSpeaker:iconPageSpeaker: May 14, 2008, 2:03:22 PM
lol np. I bet it did. eh, I wouldn't say that. we both have different styles and I can't say yours or my style is better than the other, you know?

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There's only one way to fix a clock. And that's with sugar, butter, jam, and tea. But no mustard. That would be silly.

-Mad Hatter


My Gawd! I'm out for a few minutes and when I come back you're suddenly a fucking pixie?!?!

-Scribe Skean
~gunsblazin:icongunsblazin: May 14, 2008, 2:08:30 PM
she got giggle when she read the twinkle in her eye part cause i had told her she had beautiful eyes day b4 (she rly does). haha but i do love most people eyes, its most attractive thing for me, wich is weird cuz when im shy i have hard time talking to someone eye to eye. well your style rocks. btw i might not be on for a bit. idk howlong but im missing u already lol

--
I find it kind of funny
I find it kind of sad
the dreams in which I'm dying
are the best I've ever had.
--Gary Jules