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Hush little baby
don't you cry
daddy's in the living room
trying to get high
and if daddy dont buzzed
it will be a waste of his twenty bucks
hush little baby
don't you cry
daddy's in the bedroom
fucking his wife
and if daddy don't get sex
he will be a emotional wreck
hush little baby
don't you cry
daddy want to sleep tonight
he hasn't slept in three weeks
and if he don't
you're getting put out on the street
hush little baby
don't you cry
daddys on his deathbed
waiting to die
daddy would like to go in peace
so shut the hell up
if you please
©2007-2010 *gunsblazin
:icongunsblazin:

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what have i done to a child's song

as i was writing this you where supposed to hate the dad
but at least he takes his place as the father and doesnt get rid of the child

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:iconsuan-la-tang:
I wish he had gotten rid of the kid. It would have saved him years of therapy. Lol.

The ending is PERFECT.

Great job!

--
Militant Atheist
:iconpuwen:
Amazing job. Whilst you are sometimes not consistent with rhythm, you are direct in your speech and don't hold anything back. Terrific work; this is incredible.
xx

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:icongunsblazin:
thanks for the fav
:highfive:
if you liked that i have others

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I find it kind of funny
I find it kind of sad
the dreams in which I'm dying
are the best I've ever had.
--Gary Jules
:icongunsblazin:
thanks if you liked that you should check out my other stuff

--
I find it kind of funny
I find it kind of sad
the dreams in which I'm dying
are the best I've ever had.
--Gary Jules
:iconsakuradolly:
DUDE THATS AWESOME :highfive: :hug: :lmao: ITS MY NEW FAV :)

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"Let up the suicide doors.
This is my life homey, you decide yours.
I know that Jesus died for us,
But I couldn't tell you who decide wars.
So I parallel double parked that motherfucker sideways"
-Kanye West (Cant Tell Me Nothing)
:iconeclipseg007:
LMAO omg where do you come up with this stuff

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"The journey is what brings happiness not the destination" :meditation:
:iconpuwen:
Nice hint.
Please just ask if you want me to read, I'm happy too. ^^ I get a lot of rude requests, so excuse me for snapping >_<

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:icongunsblazin:
lol Busted!
its all good

--
I find it kind of funny
I find it kind of sad
the dreams in which I'm dying
are the best I've ever had.
--Gary Jules

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