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Dad you the one
That filled me with this hate
It can't be help now
It’s far too late

You wouldn’t left me be your son
Or even a friend
Now one of us will meet
A tragic end

So meet me in the courtyard
When the clock strikes noon
In half and hours time
One of us will die soon

Why couldn’t you love me?
Treat me like a son
No time for questions
Time to draw our guns

The clock hits noon
The guns fire their blast
One man lies dead
Cause of the others tormented past

I still live
But my father is dead
Killed from my hate
And the shot to his head

Ive killed my father
So I must die as well
Place the gun under my chin
We’ve earned out places in hell

I never could have been your son
We never could have been friends
But together we face
Our tragic ends
©2008-2010 *gunsblazin
:icongunsblazin:

Author's Comments

would like to thank kayla and brandon for inspireing this

idk how good this is but i love it, its my first time trying out a ballad and useing stanzas

Comments


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:iconrugthug:
omg omg omg i luvded it!!!!!!!a hug for a good job well done!

--
When all of my world came crashing down,
That was the moment I really knew how to frown.
:icongunsblazin:
thanks!
type this stuff without pressing enter
:
hug
:
its how u do a emote :hug:

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I find it kind of funny
I find it kind of sad
the dreams in which I'm dying
are the best I've ever had.
--Gary Jules
:iconrugthug:
:hug:

--
When all of my world came crashing down,
That was the moment I really knew how to frown.
:icongunsblazin:
awwww lol
yep all kinda on emotes

--
I find it kind of funny
I find it kind of sad
the dreams in which I'm dying
are the best I've ever had.
--Gary Jules
:iconebonyclokk:
freaking sweet man. I love it. I think you did very well. There are a few spelling mistakes, but I'm not the type to care much about that lol

--
If life is a labor, I'll slave till the end
:iconemo-angel666:
omg!!!! that wus amazing!!!!! i loved it! it wus sad tho...i still loved ittttt!!!
♥emo angel♥
:icongunsblazin:
omg!ty!

--
I find it kind of funny
I find it kind of sad
the dreams in which I'm dying
are the best I've ever had.
--Gary Jules
:icongunsblazin:
ty.thank you.thx. ya i dont care much bout em either thats y they there

--
I find it kind of funny
I find it kind of sad
the dreams in which I'm dying
are the best I've ever had.
--Gary Jules
:iconforwinds:
omg i love the 3rd and 4th stanzas! it was amazing! :D

--
Band geek and proud of it! :heart:

(Do illiterate people get the full effect of Alphabet soup?)
All those who believe in telekinesis, raise my hand.
Smile, and the world will smile with you. Laugh and they'll all think you're on drugs.
:icongunsblazin:
lol thanks!

--
I find it kind of funny
I find it kind of sad
the dreams in which I'm dying
are the best I've ever had.
--Gary Jules

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