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The voice speaks to him
The poor little kid
It's cursed him forever
Of it he'll never be rid

The voice comes from his doll
His Fella plushy
That's dressed as a clown
With a smile of insanity

It speaks to the child
Tells him to do horrid things
On Halloween night
Terror it brings

The Fella turned to him
Saying its time to kill
Instructing the boy
That his family's blood he will spill

The boy begged for mercy
But the doll told him no
Said there was evil inside him
And its time for it to show

The boy asked sadly
Will this set me free?
The clown faced Fella laughed
And said maybe we'll see

So the boy picked up his blade
he held it tight
as he snuck behind his father
Stabbing with all his might

Then he found his brother
With time to spare
The brother's scream was silenced
As the knife cut through the air

Fella grined
His boy was doing just fine
At this rate
They'd all be dead in no time

In the corner he hid
The darkness he did sit
And when his mother walked by
He cut her up bit by bit

The boy looked at what he'd done
And let out a loud sob
As his clown Fella walked up
And congratulated his good job

Am I done the boy asked
As he handed him the knife
Fella handed it back
No you still must take your own life
©2009 *gunsblazin
:icongunsblazin:

Author's Comments

this is my first contest entery in anything so please be gentle lol the last verse was spoes to be diff but hand to change it to stay in the 250 word limit

happy haloween

thanks naomi for letting me know about context

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:iconforwinds:
muahahahahahaha... how evil!

i'm liking the rhyme scheme. :)

--
Band geek and proud of it! :heart:

(Do illiterate people get the full effect of Alphabet soup?)
All those who believe in telekinesis, raise my hand.
Smile, and the world will smile with you. Laugh and they'll all think you're on drugs.
:iconbrandy1200:
good! and the rhyming worked really well. its dark but still good!

--
Many Believe in God, or that there is a God out there...
but how many, actually, believe God?
:icongunsblazin:
thank you very much :) plz fav and share with ur friends?

--
I find it kind of funny
I find it kind of sad
the dreams in which I'm dying
are the best I've ever had.
--Gary Jules
:icongunsblazin:
thanks =D plz fav and share with friends?

--
I find it kind of funny
I find it kind of sad
the dreams in which I'm dying
are the best I've ever had.
--Gary Jules
:icongrandmasterspike:
Well done, pal. Great dark poetry. I'm proud of you, man.

--
A shadow never dies, it simply fades away...
Check out The Shadows of Society at [link] and show your support!
~Spike~
:icongunsblazin:
thanks man i rly try ^^

--
I find it kind of funny
I find it kind of sad
the dreams in which I'm dying
are the best I've ever had.
--Gary Jules
:iconforwinds:
sure. :)

--
Band geek and proud of it! :heart:

(Do illiterate people get the full effect of Alphabet soup?)
All those who believe in telekinesis, raise my hand.
Smile, and the world will smile with you. Laugh and they'll all think you're on drugs.
:icongunsblazin:
thank you so much

--
I find it kind of funny
I find it kind of sad
the dreams in which I'm dying
are the best I've ever had.
--Gary Jules
:iconlettemuffin:
hehehehehehehehehehehehe that was wicked as hell i loved it hun
:icongunsblazin:
im glad you liked it =D

--
I find it kind of funny
I find it kind of sad
the dreams in which I'm dying
are the best I've ever had.
--Gary Jules

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